Click,click,click! homework. Homework Homework. the next day I was In the dog kennel. I walke d out calmly and ate some BBQ Copper kettle Potato chips. there was no cereal. Keri was awake, so itook im for a walk. tHE SUN WAS GOING UP. ii went back home after a long swim with keri at the beach. on the way, we found a stone. So we held it.(Don't blame us) And scorpions came out. I woke to the noise of scuttling, And as scorpion king said hello, young traveler. Why are you here? (As if I knew) I don't know. Well, then. come here. you can be a loyal guest! hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah. I did not understand a word. Really? REALLY? I walked into a bedroom. there was a piece of cheese there so I ate it. There was even a subway on the bed. Ace! Xtra ham, Xtra bacon Cheese, and butter, classic bread. My fav! It was actually quite nice. Except that it was underground and bugs on the walls. T, least they didn't eat my SUBWAY. OR EVEN THE CHEESE!!!!!!!! ...
maybe next time make it a story since your a very good storywriter!!!
ReplyDeletebey blades is not a good idea to write about and you should have made a longer story
ReplyDeleteand should added detail
its not a narrative bro
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