Benji,beau,marco,joj, and keri called for help from th3 greatest heroes of time. Benji said, i’m one of the heroes too” and he disappeared. Soon, four heroes landed next to them. The leader, said, my name is Spark. These three other heroes names are Benji, gust, and deffy. We keep dragons as pets. That’s how we fly around”then Spark flew into the air, standing on his skrill( a skrill is a dragon) he did multiple flips and actually shot a electricity blot into the sky. At that VERY moment it started to rain. It became a thunderstorm. Spark smiled. He jumped off his dragon, and some black wings extended out of his suit. He flew around for a bit. Ten minutes later. He got struck by lightning. He fell down and then disappeared. Then he appeared behind keri. Wassup, fellas? Whats your names? This is Beau, and his dog is keri. Keri’s brother is marco, and marcos twin is jojo” sweet! My dragon is a skrill named sparky” gust’s dragon is a titan wing king speed stinger. I have three drag...
maybe next time make it a story since your a very good storywriter!!!
ReplyDeletebey blades is not a good idea to write about and you should have made a longer story
ReplyDeleteand should added detail
its not a narrative bro
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